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S y l v i A 🌞 K a l i n A's avatar

This actually felt like jazz rhythm to me. 😊

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Phil H's avatar

The word once rhymes with the word concussed in this poem. They're not in the right places to rhyme, nor do they really sound the same. And yet they rhyme. This is magic!

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